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space cowboy

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as i sleep
seeds of thought
      unfurl and bear
      their cotyledons

             (and i feel infinite).


morning comes
      and the stars steal away
             with my fields of meaning

      (i think they used
      the moon as a scythe).


i chase them
      on trains of thought
             and horses stitched
                    from day dreams

                                  (a celestial sheriff).
(i feel like using parentheses today).

Any thoughts? Too abstract? I want there to be imagery, but a more ethereal brand.  I'm very paranoid that this is just vague shitty writing, even if I really like it.
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Why do you choose to not use capitalization in so many of yours?