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blood moon

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i tried to compare the moon
to everything under it;

a tarnished dime,
robin's breast
lock of hair
and fire's crest

and it occurred to me
that I was eclipsed
by the ground
beneath my feet,
unable to look at the stars
and truly understand
what they were saying.
A few months ago there was a blood moon and I couldn't sleep at all because I just kept writing things down.

Editted this up a while ago to give it a bit more rhythm. I've been writing a lot lately, but a lot of it is bigger works that I'm saving to apply for poetry competitions that don't like submissions to be published anywhere-- I'll post a few of my favorites if they ever win, or if I decide to put them out to pasture. (:
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