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Ordinary Complaint

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Somewhere along the way,
I got the impression that
good poems had big words
strung together like pearls,
draped around fragile-necked statements;

an art of growing flowers
without ever bothering to cultivate
the ground beneath them.

What about the Saturday afternoons
that last so long they cling like dew
to the undersides of Wednesday mornings,
or the press of clouds against a sky
that can’t decide which color to be?

I am quickly losing interest
in poetry that doesn’t make room
for chickadees to nest between
simple similes.
I am trying to get better at writing things that don't make me sad-- I think it's important to be able to write confidently about the beautiful things in life.
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shep4life's avatar
This is really really good