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Light

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Street lamps, neon signs,
Headlights lance Night's velvet side;
Stars stand by, helpless.
Light pollution is very real.
© 2013 - 2024 Seilf
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Hi there! I've chosen you as the 68th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week :D (Big Grin)

Have to say I'm in full agreement with the message of this poem right here. It's a shame that you can't see stars properly when you're in urban environments especially when there are so many street lights about. I sometimes wish I was most fortunate to go star gazing in a clear countryside as that would be rather beautiful. Very nicely written with plenty of good descriptions.